Ye kaisi kashish hai, jo hamen barbas khichti hai
Ye kaisa manjar hai, jo aankhon me sama jata hai,
Hum kuch bhi samjh pate in behki hawaon ke paron ko,
Usse pehle hi aanchal kaanton me ulajh jata hai.....
Kashhh hum ankhon me khoye sapne dikha pate unko,
Dil me ubharti saanson k samander ko suna paate unko...
Vo ek bar palat ker dekh lete, bas ek baar...
Unki iss berukhi se, khwaishon ka jarra jarra seher jata hai....
Kabhi kabhi apni naadaniyon per haans padte hain hum...
Kabhi satrangi khwabon ki duniya ko soch ker rona bhi aata hai...
Kash hum waqt ko wapas le ja sakte uss mor per....
Jahan se vo rasta liya tha humne ,jo hume unse door, bahot door le jata hai...
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8 comments:
arre waah...tu to poet ban gayi :)...agar shuruwat aisi hai to age to aur badhiya likhegi...good start :)
phodu likha hai dear...gud..keep it up...but tujhe itna pyar hua ki tune ek shayari likh dali..kya asar hai...gud...
good hai ... really nice !! :)
but plzzzzzzz back ground change karen ...
pehle hi darr lag jaata hai ....
aur hindi/urdu me aapki abhivyakti kaabile taareef hai !! :)
My My!! that was some poetry!! wahh anu ...dint know ki yeh bhi talent hai aapke paas..and itni mast hindi...kya baat hai!!! :)
Hey thanks rashmi, mannu.. ;o)
@Aditi....i wish to achieve d level of ur writing some day...u r awesumm yaar... :)..and thanks for all protsahan...
@nidhi...i discovered today itself..and dis was composed in half an hr time... ;)
Hi Anu,
Good Poem n mast likha hain.....
Tere andar itna talent hain yaar...
kaha chipa rakha tha yeh talent...
chalo koi nahi..still very nice ...
keep it up...:)
Nice!!
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